The quick 4-step test to find out if your headline sucks
Your headline is one of the hardest workers in your marketing collateral. It’s a handful of words that can make the difference between your copy being read, and being ignored. But writing headlines can feel like your brain has been picked over by a tribe of garage sale fanatics.
You know the feeling…. You’ve been trying to come up with a headline for hours. The ones you have are ok; some of them are even pretty good. So how do you know when you’ve got the one?
This is a handy test of four U’s I picked up from Bob Bly’s Copywriters Handbook.
Is your headline unique?
You can grab your audience’s attention by offering them something new or unique. Even if your product or service is far from unique, look for new and interesting angles that will get your audience’s attention.
“Book a Japanese Beauty Treatment” turns into “Discover the beauty secret that keeps Japanese women young.”
Your headline should also be unique to your business (as much as possible). If your headline could just as easily apply to a business that sells swimming pools as beauty treatments, you know you’ve got work to do.
“Get ready for summer” turns into “Get your legs summer ready with a free bronze with every wax”.
Is your headline ultra-specific?
Making vague claims in your headline secures your seat on the ‘Ignore Me’ bus. Use concrete, quantifiable terms to make your claims more credible and trustworthy. Numbers are great as they imply you’ve done some research but you can also use specific names, titles, descriptions, projections and results.
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